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excursie 7
i want to take you to the place no one else believes in
it has the colour of magic and a lake too
i wanna skinny dip without questioning what will happen if the day after we remember
can I take you to this place
that is may just exists in my fantasy doesn't make it any less real
ill let you discover through my eyes and show you I view through purple glass
exersice 8
should I cut my hair
would they stare
should I do it
blue hair seems like a choice
it'll give me a voice
I think it'll fit
exercise 9
I hear a voice inside my head
I can't make it clear
I keep facing the same old face
mirroring my stare
it is left
it is right
should I start to fear
I keep being pulled down
now im on my knees
tell me who are you
exercise 10
i want to start over
go back to the day we sat on the train
when my ticket wasn't worn down yet
from being tucked in the same place
i want to grasp your gaze and let you know
I never ment to walk away
this is pretty awesome thanks .
Ответитьyou’re smile is like a dolphin
fallen like a elephant
remember you like a sentiment
lost in the movement
this type of thing usually doesn't work for me but thank you so much! these are so helpful! i've been doing it for almost two weeks straight now and they genuinely have made songwriting a lot less intimidating.
Ответить12.30
Ответитьi've written some really nice stuff with these videos. thank you so much, Emma :')
Ответитьthanks
ОтветитьLove this
ОтветитьGreat exercises! I'm a newbie to lyrics. This is the best info I've found yet. Thanks.
ОтветитьYou are beutyful love
ОтветитьSooo much FUN! Will definitely be coming back for some brain-stretching the coming week!
Here's m POV-take on Foo Fighters "The Pretender":
What're you sayin, you're just like another?
What're you saying, you don't really bother to be my toy,
You're the origin,
What're you saying, we'll never go out again
😂
Favorite exercise so far - thank you for this video. It's a treasure chest of inspiration~
Thank you Emma. Exceedingly valuable.
Who’s the bomb? That’s right. You are.
Exactly what I was looking for & super helpful.
ОтветитьKeep Writing guys,thanks for making this video
ОтветитьCastle
Jester
Queen
King
Clown
Coins
Treasure
Riches
Dresses
Gowns
Jewelry
Shoes
Midas
Elizabeth
Bricked
Sharp
Points
Doors
Gatherings
Coronation
Celebration
Red crown
Crown
Apple
Snow white
Princess
Prince
Royal
Reign
Evil
Vampires
Vampires haunt me in my castle,
I only lost half the battle,
In the end my crowns still high,
My riches multiply ,
No evil apples will ruin a celebration of mine,
Can I be a queen ? In this pressure of being the queen im a jester,
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restaurante
-grandma
-sizzler,
-nice day,
-food
-laughing
-jokes
-cousins
-uncles
-never happened again
-burgundy
-Christian
-cook
-strong
-loving
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Roll high waves roll tonight
Beaches are pretty at this time a year,
You’d love the way it is,
Blues cold crashing
Boat to keep us floating
Lighthouse keeps flickering
Saltiness never got anyone anywhere good,
Unbothered in the sand,
Sexy abs man rubbin oil on my back,
Lay back now wit a deep breath and smile,
Finally my time to relax for once in a while,
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Miss
Kiss
Diss
Wrists
Wish
Tish
Bish
Rich
Spits
Hit and miss,
Hit or miss,
Miss piss
Sis
Miss your laugh,
Wish we could’ve went back,
Not a diss just a quick vent,
Your kisses was shit,
I remember how my sis reacted to seeing the cuts on your wrists,
What I feel for u is deep but u hit or miss,
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Skipped the exercise here
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#7 exercise
Cloudy skies here alone with us at night,
You have the cutest grin,
Under this starry sky,
Weathers perfect campfire just in case,
Sleeping bags and cuddling under our tent,
Never loved like this before,
Just you,
Me,
Our energy,
Has me here wondering why I need more,
Maybe its the way the warm fire lights your eyes,
Maybe its the silence around us
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😘😘😘😘😘😘
ОтветитьAwesome video thanks x
ОтветитьSteam of consciousness
Get hella out
(2x) Get hella out (hella 4x) out
U bro kicked me
You think l'm britney
No gotta a kidney
Fell ya booty jiggly
No sydney
Show of Britney
No matter a Symphony
I would like to know
What you did that ?
We were good friends
Until you my girl
'So fuck you and...
(2x) Get hella out (hella 4x) out
No more sought
You take it down
Cuz you are a baddie
Of course a nasty
So I’ve been doing these daily for like months now and I always find it hard to do the picture this exercise. Is it bad to do that exercise but with different pictures?
ОтветитьI always cringe at my own lyrics lmao
My version of umbrella
And if the rain pours
Say we'll drown together
Stick it out all the way
Through November
Say you'll still be here
Won't leave me alone
Even if I fall
'Cause I'd be here
Now that the sun's still out
It's easy
But if the storm hits
Tell me you'd be with me
Cause you can stand under my umbrella
You can stand under my umbrella
Me: [writing down suicidal lyrics and words surrounding depression]
Her: "Noice job guys!"
What a gem! Thank you for creating cool content and adding value to my life. :D I just did day 1 and here is one of the exercises I did.
A: solving you is too hard
B: my strategy is lame
C: will I find the answer
B: Or will I go insane
Saw lots of videos for song writing nothing worked.
This is what we i needed. Thank you a lot emma.....it is helping me....
You're wonderful. Thank you for your time!! Lyrics... here I come!!
ОтветитьSometimes i scare myself to death
Sometimes my mind is what i dont get
It doesnt seem so fair
I think ill boil over
Am i just going nuts
Ah yeah yeah yeah
EmmaMcGann what a nice video you made.10 q a lot.
ОтветитьShawn Mendes - 'Stitches' Rewrite
I'm falling to the ground now
She's standing, watching as I bleed out
I know that she could kiss this better
I don't think I should let her
I've begged for help, she don't care
I'm aching, paralysed by her stare
I know that she could kiss this better
I don't think I should let her.
This was fun! The prompts worked well
Ответитьday 1: Exercse 1 : word: connect touch link (together) feel close from afar distance (always close ) friendship relationship exercise 2: song: unstoppable by sia: I put my armor on to show how strong I am I put my armor on to you that I am I'm unstoppable I'm a porche with no brakes/ if you think I'm weak than I will show you I'm stronger than you 2x need proof? ill show you that I am I'm unstoppable I'm porche with no brakes
ОтветитьThis was seriously so helpful. It got me writing more than the last couple weeks of fumbling trying to find out where to start. Breaking things down and operationalizing is something I struggle with but taking it a step at a time makes it manageable.
ОтветитьThis is the only thing I can come up with
When the sun sings
Beats line up
To show the world and
Let the hopes pop
To make our dreams a cup
How our hearts feel bright
Sitting on top of the height of the mountain
Under the moonlight
Gazing at the stars at night
Leaning on his shoulders in delight
Feeling the love of a loved one at the sight
Do these daily:
1) Word Association
In 3 minutes write all the words you can that you associate with that word.
Example: “Dream”
Sleepy bed sweet lovely warm happy covers blankets pillows images ideas sweetness love beauty sounds escape running flying floating time passing loneliness dying waking morning getting dressed rehearsals psychology people imaginary people getting lost subconscious Dali surrealism meaning spirits messages interpretations secrets other worldly alien movie of the mind death not waking up ever again motionless sleepwalking talking in sleep
I couldn't concentrate on the video because of the mesmerizing accent that even weakens the knees 🙈
ОтветитьBeen doing this once or twice a day for two weeks, and not only has my songwriting improved but in casual conversation I’m naturally able to express myself better
ОтветитьGreat
ОтветитьMs. Emma. I have a question again but this time it's about what I've did at the "Ghost Writer" last month
it's because. when I've done 1 of that lyric writing exercises last July....
I've used 1 of my favorite country songs "These Days" by my idol country band "Rascal Flatts"
and the thing is when I was on those lines.... I've really changed the lyrics of that song
into the reasons why I dedicate that song to my friend (and also my 1st Love) who've dumped or rejected me
So. is it really alright to do that thing?.... 'cause for me it's really embarrassing?