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Nice ❤
ОтветитьBro you're awesome❤️
ОтветитьWow ❤
ОтветитьWomen - Shakti , Sampatti , Sadbuddhi.
ОтветитьSo beautiful
Ответитьamazingggggg
ОтветитьYeah!!!!
"I need distance from loved one"
"I demand space from intimacy"
"I can't shed tears on war but I cry for a dying whale"
Wow!! Those lines are amazing 😍
So relatable to me🥺
Lovely one❤❤
👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻
ОтветитьWhat a tight ending ❤
ОтветитьGood ❤❤❤
ОтветитьAnd then there's me,
Desolate with so much need for privacy.
I need distance from loved ones, i demand space from intimacy.
I cannot offer warm bread or enthusiastic tours of my city,
I could hum a shaqeel song or crack a joke that's witty.
And on the rare days,
That i get along with the god , i could toss around a prayer but that too all muffled and odd.
On most days- i smoke half cigarettes and read urdu stories.
I stand in my balcony and gaze at the windows across all storey's
I bleed words and waves imaginary tales.
That was crafted soo beautifully and narration was all on point, 💌 absolutely loved this piece 💗💗
ОтветитьAmazing. In love with poetry
ОтветитьYour imagination!! ... So Relateable❤
ОтветитьIts me❤
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ОтветитьHow can I perform in unerase poetry ?
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