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Oh thank you, I am so happy I didn't have to wait weeks for part 2.
ОтветитьGreat job well done thank you so very much great story got to have more please thank you
ОтветитьThere is no sound in space ,due to the lack of a atmosfere...
ОтветитьFab, I didn't have to wait too log. great stories, thank you, Glasgow Scotland here
ОтветитьDeafening: syllable -de-fen-ing. Readable: syllable (reed-a-ble)
Ответитьtime to bring out the really big guns.
Ответитьquite literally finished the first story was sad there was no part to hit home and what do i see but part 2.hell yea
ОтветитьPart 1 of this story was good. This one is definitely AI written. Just a typical blah blah blah repetitive shit!!!
ОтветитьThe 'author' of his story has no understanding of physics. Vacuum doesn't carry sound, so the soundse they describe are not possible. Too many useless adjectives.
ОтветитьWhy, all of a sudden, is a mere senator in charge of Earth's fleet? Where did he become an expert in tactics?
ОтветитьThanks
ОтветитьNot sure why people fear AI so much when it has yet to write a simple story where sound doesn't propagate through space.
ОтветитьThe subtitles and AI are shit. If you want to make money from a channel then earn it. Work!!! Only takes a few minutes to proofread and punctuate. Bingo... triple subs & likes overnight. Now having said that. Are you working on a part 3?
Ответить❤❤❤❤❤ 🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉
ОтветитьTypical AI, It can't tell if it is Harbingers or Harvesters?
ОтветитьGreat story! Has a few holes in the background story ( why and how earth disappeared hundreds of yesrs ago. Harbingers coming... took a looooong time) but still a really fun story
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Ugh... senate weaklings are suddenly in charge of the Terran fleet. Wow You need some work on the story lines
ОтветитьI wonder why these stories are constantly using, "Get the citizens evacuated?", Against the fleet mentioned in this story; wear are they going to go?
ОтветитьI don’t get too nit picky with these stories but man there are too many holes. I will skip the rest.
ОтветитьJesus fuck, why.... how.... what the actual fuck did i just listen to....
If thats AI then..... ye.... i guess..... fair enough i suppose (idk still recovering after that brain meltdown)
Not only it's shitty rip off of basically mass effect story line in quite a shortcut, but it also could have been easly "told" in 15 to 20 min max.
Can't see a point whatsoever for half of the "story time" wasted on repeated sentences, half the time contradict one with another....
Now it's galaxy at stake, No it's humanity at stake, no its earth, no its galaxy. WHAT THE FUCK
Awaiting Part #3 for the rest of the story! Great tale so far, please finish it.
ОтветитьI was so happy when it said part two I couldn’t believe it had read it out loud part two! Waiting for the next episode. I will check back with you. Thank you so much for the second part ! The story is not over!!!! great job, well done, and thank you!
ОтветитьI quit ! ! !
A battle in space has no sou d !
The only sound is when something impacts n the hull that you are in transmitting vibrations through the hull and the atmosphere inside !
AND :
I done here !
I will peek occasionally and see if you've made any corrections . If none have been made. . . Then ....
PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Before Part 3.......GET A NEW FUKIN AI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WTF is: "deh-BREEZ", "ar-MAY-duh", "BEAR-idge"(barrage), "DEEFening roar", "teh-RAN"(again and again), "un-RED-able"(again and again)!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!????????? It is Fkn painful to sit through your POS AI. The story is good. FIX OR REPLACE THAT DAMNED AI!!!!!!
ОтветитьLMFAO.............. Make 2 videos that are 30 min's each........... with maybe a 3rd coming another 30 min's I bet and this story was a waste of time and A.I, Just keep pumping garbage stories as it is free
Ответить@ me when part 3 comes out please
ОтветитьThank you for part 2😊❤
ОтветитьThe story has too many holes. Humanity left just to go prepare for an enemy that took hundreds of years to appear
ОтветитьAnd not a huge rip off of the "Mass Effect" series.
ОтветитьPart 1 was ok. Started part 2 and listenen about 7 minutes and stopped.
1. Get your AI to stop looping through things already said.
2. I had a feeling these senators were going to take control of the fleet. That's a storyline killer.
3. At least adhere to basic physics. (no sound in space)
Trash storytelling
ОтветитьGood Grief! the repetition on the first half of the story is incredible!
ОтветитьI usually h8 this channel but i really enjoyed this story thank you. Nevermind wtf why was the Alien giving commands to the Admiral
ОтветитьIt made so many mistakes with intonations my irritation slided over into endearment.
ОтветитьBoy this went off the tracks.I expected more from the EARTH BOOGEYMEN. DISAPPOINTING. Stopped 1/2 way through part 2.
ОтветитьCrap story
ОтветитьJesus Christ, would it kill you to PROOF-READ THIS BEFORE YOU POST IT?!
ОтветитьAn absolutely great story! The AI, on the other hand…disappointing.
Ответитьterrible pronunciation
ОтветитьNice 👌.
ОтветитьWhy don't you keep congruency in your story? The characters from the station, from part 1, and beginning of part 2, aren't even the same.
ОтветитьWhat's with the missing gap between the end of part one and start of part two? A senator, crews on the flag ship? wtf?
ОтветитьWhy would humanity sleep for centuries when they could have kept building ships and weapons? This whole story doesn’t make sense. A senator in charge a fleet that isn’t really ready for a battle they had centuries to prepare for. Also, there is no sound in space.
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